I was unable to make any revisions from my 3rd quarter submission due to lack of technology. If I had the technology to make changes I would have taken more pictures to add more engaging photos. I would have gotten pictures with models in them so I don't have all food pictures. Also I would have changed my cover page so it does not have a border around it. I would have made the articles and page numbers in my table oof contents more inline and even. I then would have added our instagram @ in the bottom right with the page numbers.
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